Genie's downfall

The flattering Genie stewart-sinclear’s outfit (for the book parade) astounded on lookers. Genie says “the character I chose is from the best selling book Warriors. Grey stripe is my second choice.” But after eating a delicious breakfast of toast (which her mother made) Genie couldn’t remember where the tail of raven paw (a character from warriors) was left. So she changed the character to Grey stripe. “Cats are my favourite animal” she stated happily when asked why that animal? The costume was made from fur that was lying around the house. Genie stated that she shouldn’t have won “because other put t a lot more effort into theirs, my costumes ears cost $3.” Genie says. She forgot if she had paid, leaving readers wandering if Genie had paid at all. After Genie had made her second outfit she found the tail of the first cat, Raven paw.

The book parade was hosted by long bay primary school. Many say that’ Genie’s costume was forgettable and didn’t look good at all”. Many others say that they were “shocked at the outfit” and said that she “needed to spend more time on it”. Some didn’t even notice Genies cat outfit. Loads of people say that Genie’s costume reminds them of the musical Cats. Some others state that the costume was “home-made” and you could see the “hand sewn stitching”. Obviously poor Genie didn’t notice that on lookers and class mates didn’t like the effort and the way that Genie had put her cat outfit together, but some still say that they adore her cute cat costume very much!

By Kira Corbeau  



 

Chocolate

Are you addicted to chocolate, you can’t live with out it well don’t worry because now all over the world you can find chocolate bar shops just on the street for only a cheap price of $2.50*. So take a walk and you might just find your self a chocolate stand!

 *Price may vary
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Why does everyone like Star Wars?

Matt likes Star Wars because it has cool sound effects.  He said he likes it because no other movie made like it. He also likes Star Wars because he can play with it in LEGO. Matt has liked Star Wars for over 5 years.

Sam said he likes it because it has cool light sabers and cool force. Sam said he has liked Star Wars for 6years.

Max said he likes Star Wars because the movie has cool sound effects. And he likes seeing the people with light sabers.

I think that many people like Star Wars.

By Quintin Venter
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Joseph's birthday

Joseph’s last birthday party on September 27 2009 at rainbow ends. One friend, named David went to Joseph’s birthday party.
Ryan said “he had no guts to invite me”.
“I wouldn’t come any way, because I am a girl and he is a boy and anyway he wouldn’t invite me”, Briar said.
They went on the roller coaster and nearly blew their heads off.
Joseph said that he went on every ride at rainbows end.
 David fell off his bumper boats and did a back flip into the water.

Joseph said that he nearly ran over a guy on the bumper cars.
His mum dropped him off and came back at the end of the party. 
David said “I would come again if he invited me”.
Joseph said “I want to go ice skating next year”.
Joe said that he loved the fair fall and he wanted to go on the fair fall by himself but his mum wanted to go on with him.
When David fell off the bumper boats there was a guy who tried to save him.
That was so funny Joe couldn’t stop cracking up.
They were there for the whole day so they were tired when they got back.

 By Max Dowson